I like that you have your three reasons.I wish that you could name the book and the author
some thing that Grabbed me is the begging of the concussion
Good job Philip. I liked how you really detailed on how he was feeling.I just also wish you put in who the author.Amazing job.sincerely Grace
I really liked how you named everything in the intro. Great job :)
I liked how you detailed every reason.
that is vary clear
I like that you have your three reasons.I wish that you could name the book and the author
ReplyDeletesome thing that Grabbed me is the begging of the concussion
ReplyDeleteGood job Philip. I liked how you really detailed on how he was feeling.
ReplyDeleteI just also wish you put in who the author.
Amazing job.
sincerely Grace
I really liked how you named everything in the intro. Great job :)
ReplyDeleteI liked how you detailed every reason.
ReplyDeletethat is vary clear
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